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[ECO-4988] Implement (some of) Room Lifecycle Monitoring spec #67

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Resolves #53. See commit messages for more details.

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  • New Features

    • Integrated AsyncAlgorithms to enhance asynchronous capabilities across multiple components.
    • Introduced new async methods for managing room lifecycle events, improving concurrency and state management.
    • Added functionality for managing state change subscriptions in the lifecycle contributor channel.
  • Bug Fixes

    • Improved error handling in attach and detach methods.
  • Tests

    • Updated tests to support async/await patterns, enhancing the robustness of room lifecycle management tests.

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The pull request introduces significant changes to the AblyChat project, primarily focusing on enhancing room lifecycle management through the implementation of asynchronous methods and protocols. The Package.swift file is updated to include the AsyncAlgorithms dependency across multiple targets. The RoomLifecycleManager and related protocols are modified to support async operations, improving state management and concurrency. Additionally, mock contributors and channels are introduced to facilitate testing of the new async functionalities.

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Files Change Summary
Package.swift Added AsyncAlgorithms product as a dependency in AblyChat, AblyChatTests, and BuildTool targets.
Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift Updated RoomLifecycleContributorChannel and RoomLifecycleManager to support async methods for lifecycle operations, state management, and introduced new protocols for better concurrency handling.
Tests/AblyChatTests/Mocks/MockRoomLifecycleContributor.swift Introduced MockRoomLifecycleContributor actor implementing the RoomLifecycleContributor protocol with async methods for testing purposes.
Tests/AblyChatTests/Mocks/MockRoomLifecycleContributorChannel.swift Modified MockRoomLifecycleContributorChannel to manage state change subscriptions and updated async handling in attach and detach methods.
Tests/AblyChatTests/RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift Transitioned tests to async patterns, updated helper methods for testing state changes, and modified test cases to reflect new async behaviors and scenarios.

Assessment against linked issues

Objective Addressed Explanation
Implement Room Lifecycle Monitoring part of spec (CHA-RL1g2)
Implement behaviour for ongoing operations (CHA-RL1d, CHA-RL3c)

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Actionable comments posted: 9

🧹 Outside diff range and nitpick comments (8)
Tests/AblyChatTests/Mocks/MockRoomLifecycleContributor.swift (2)

5-8: LGTM: Properties are well-defined. Consider adding documentation.

The properties are correctly defined:

  • feature and channel are appropriately marked as nonisolated.
  • emitDiscontinuityArguments is correctly marked as private(set).

Consider adding documentation comments to describe the purpose of each property, especially for emitDiscontinuityArguments. This would enhance the readability and maintainability of the mock object.


15-17: LGTM: emitDiscontinuity method is well-implemented. Consider adding a completion handler.

The emitDiscontinuity method correctly appends the error to the emitDiscontinuityArguments array, allowing for verification in tests. The async marking is appropriate.

Consider adding an optional completion handler parameter to simulate asynchronous behavior more realistically:

func emitDiscontinuity(_ error: ARTErrorInfo, completion: (() -> Void)? = nil) async {
    emitDiscontinuityArguments.append(error)
    await Task.yield()  // Simulate some asynchronous work
    completion?()
}

This would allow tests to verify both the method call and its completion.

Tests/AblyChatTests/Mocks/MockRoomLifecycleContributorChannel.swift (1)

10-11: Address the TODO: Clean up old subscriptions

The TODO comment indicates the need to clean up old subscriptions to prevent potential memory leaks. It's important to implement this to manage resources effectively.

Would you like assistance in implementing the cleanup mechanism for subscriptions? I can help draft a solution or open a GitHub issue to track this task.

Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift (1)

259-260: Remove empty default case if not needed

In the switch statement handling stateChange.event, the default case is empty:

default:
    break
}

If all possible cases are already handled explicitly, you can remove the default case. This can help the compiler warn you if new cases are added to the enum in the future and are not handled in the switch statement.

Tests/AblyChatTests/RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift (4)

200-200: Address the TODO regarding pending discontinuity events

There's a TODO comment questioning the intended behavior when emitting pending discontinuity events. After confirming the correct behavior, please update the code and remove the TODO comment.

Would you like assistance in implementing the confirmed behavior or opening a GitHub issue to track this task?


747-747: Clarify and resolve the TODO in the test case

There's a TODO comment seeking clarification about the expected behavior in specification point CHA-RL4a1. Once you've obtained the necessary information, please update the test accordingly and remove the TODO comment.

Let me know if you need help interpreting the specification and updating the test.


808-808: Clarify the meaning of the specification point in CHA-RL4b1

There's uncertainty about the phrase "and the particular contributor has been attached previously" in the spec. After obtaining clarification, please update the implementation and remove the TODO comment.

Would you like assistance in interpreting this specification point and adjusting the code accordingly?


850-850: Correct grammatical error in test comment

In the test comment, change "A contributor emits an FAILED event" to "A contributor emits a FAILED event" for proper grammar.

Apply this diff:

-// When: A contributor emits an FAILED event
+// When: A contributor emits a FAILED event
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Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift (1)
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#54
File: Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift:0-0
Timestamp: 2024-09-18T18:34:37.252Z
Learning: In `RoomLifecycleManager`, handling of unexpected contributor states after attach failure will be addressed in issue #49.
Tests/AblyChatTests/RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift (3)
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#54
File: Tests/AblyChatTests/RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift:335-335
Timestamp: 2024-09-23T19:56:39.435Z
Learning: In Swift Testing, test method names do not need to start with `test`.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#54
File: Tests/AblyChatTests/RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift:499-504
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T12:47:28.179Z
Learning: In test closures, parameters like `callCount` may be used to track invocation counts correctly across invocations.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#54
File: Tests/AblyChatTests/RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift:627-631
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T12:55:21.968Z
Learning: The closure `detachImpl` in `RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift` functions as intended without external state variables to track invocation count.
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Tests/AblyChatTests/Mocks/MockRoomLifecycleContributor.swift (3)

1-4: LGTM: Imports and protocol conformance are correct.

The import statements and protocol conformance are appropriate for a mock object in a test file. The use of @testable import AblyChat allows access to internal members, which is useful for comprehensive testing.


10-13: LGTM: Initializer is correctly implemented.

The initializer properly sets up the mock object by assigning the input parameters to their corresponding properties. It's concise and does exactly what it needs to do.


1-18: Overall, the MockRoomLifecycleContributor is well-implemented and aligns with the PR objectives.

This mock implementation of RoomLifecycleContributor provides a solid foundation for testing the Room Lifecycle Monitoring functionality. It correctly captures the emitDiscontinuity calls, allowing for verification in tests.

A few minor enhancements have been suggested:

  1. Adding documentation comments to properties for improved readability.
  2. Considering the addition of a completion handler to emitDiscontinuity for more realistic asynchronous behavior simulation.

These suggestions, if implemented, would further improve the mock's utility in comprehensive testing scenarios.

Package.swift (4)

Line range hint 51-55: LGTM! Verify usage of AsyncAlgorithms in AblyChatTests.

Adding the AsyncAlgorithms dependency to the AblyChatTests target is a good practice. It allows for comprehensive testing of the Room Lifecycle Monitoring implementation that may rely on this library.

To ensure the new dependency is being utilized effectively in tests, please run the following script:

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# Test: Search for usage of AsyncAlgorithms types or functions in the test files
echo "Searching for AsyncAlgorithms usage in test files:"
rg --type swift 'AsyncAlgorithms\.' Tests/AblyChatTests

Line range hint 63-67: Verify the necessity of AsyncAlgorithms in BuildTool target.

The addition of the AsyncAlgorithms dependency to the BuildTool target is unexpected. Build tools typically don't require asynchronous algorithms. Could you please clarify the reason for this addition?

To help understand the usage, if any, please run the following script:

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rg --type swift 'import AsyncAlgorithms' Sources/BuildTool

# Test: Search for usage of AsyncAlgorithms types or functions in the BuildTool source files
echo "Searching for AsyncAlgorithms usage in BuildTool source files:"
rg --type swift 'AsyncAlgorithms\.' Sources/BuildTool

If there's no usage found, consider removing this dependency from the BuildTool target to keep the dependencies minimal and relevant.


Line range hint 1-78: Overall alignment with PR objectives

The changes to the Package.swift file partially align with the PR objectives for implementing Room Lifecycle Monitoring:

  1. Adding AsyncAlgorithms to the AblyChat target is appropriate and likely necessary for the implementation.
  2. Including AsyncAlgorithms in the AblyChatTests target allows for comprehensive testing of the new functionality.
  3. The addition of AsyncAlgorithms to the BuildTool target is unclear and may not directly relate to the Room Lifecycle Monitoring implementation.

To ensure that these changes are indeed related to the Room Lifecycle Monitoring implementation, please run the following script:

#!/bin/bash
# Description: Verify the usage of AsyncAlgorithms in relation to Room Lifecycle Monitoring

# Test: Search for Room Lifecycle Monitoring related code that uses AsyncAlgorithms
echo "Searching for Room Lifecycle Monitoring code using AsyncAlgorithms:"
rg --type swift -e 'class.*RoomLifecycle' -e 'struct.*RoomLifecycle' -e 'func.*RoomLifecycle' -C 5 | rg 'AsyncAlgorithms'

# Test: Search for TODO comments related to Room Lifecycle Monitoring
echo "Searching for TODO comments related to Room Lifecycle Monitoring:"
rg --type swift '#.*TODO.*Room Lifecycle'

This will help verify that the AsyncAlgorithms dependency is being used in the context of Room Lifecycle Monitoring and identify any remaining tasks.


42-45: LGTM! Verify usage of AsyncAlgorithms in AblyChat target.

The addition of the AsyncAlgorithms dependency to the AblyChat target is correct and aligns with the PR objectives for implementing Room Lifecycle Monitoring.

To ensure the new dependency is being utilized effectively, please run the following script:

✅ Verification successful

No instances of AsyncAlgorithms were found in the AblyChat target.

To ensure the dependency is utilized correctly, please run the following scripts:

[/run_scripts]


AsyncAlgorithms dependency is correctly integrated and utilized in the AblyChat target.

  • RoomLifecycleManager.swift imports and uses AsyncAlgorithms.
  • Test files SubscriptionTests.swift and MessageSubscriptionTests.swift also import AsyncAlgorithms for testing purposes.
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Tests/AblyChatTests/Mocks/MockRoomLifecycleContributorChannel.swift (1)

1-1: Verify necessity of @preconcurrency import

Please confirm whether the @preconcurrency attribute is still required for importing Ably. If the Ably library has been updated to be concurrency-safe, you might be able to remove this attribute.

Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift (3)

133-139: Ensure @Sendable closure adheres to concurrency requirements

You are using a @Sendable closure that captures self weakly:

group.addTask { @Sendable [weak self] in
    for await stateChange in subscription {
        await self?.didReceiveStateChange(stateChange, forContributorAt: index)
    }
}

Capturing self in a @Sendable closure can lead to concurrency issues if self is not Sendable. Additionally, the comment indicates uncertainty about the use of @Sendable.

Please verify that self conforms to Sendable and that it's safe to access within a @Sendable closure. If self is an actor (which is Sendable by default), you can safely capture it without marking the closure as @Sendable. Alternatively, consider restructuring the code to avoid capturing self in a @Sendable closure.


44-45: Clarify pendingDiscontinuityEvents usage or limit its size

The ContributorAnnotation struct contains an array pendingDiscontinuityEvents and includes a TODO comment:

// TODO: Not clear whether there can be multiple or just one (asked in https://github.com/ably/specification/pull/200/files#r1781927850)
var pendingDiscontinuityEvents: [ARTErrorInfo] = []

If only one discontinuity event is expected per contributor, consider using a single optional ARTErrorInfo instead of an array to simplify the code. If multiple events are possible, ensure there is a mechanism to prevent unbounded growth of this array, such as limiting its size or periodically clearing old events.


12-14: ⚠️ Potential issue

Fix method signatures for attach() and detach()

The method signatures func attach() async throws(ARTErrorInfo) and func detach() async throws(ARTErrorInfo) are incorrect. In Swift, you cannot specify the type of error thrown in the function signature. The throws keyword indicates that a function can throw an error, but it doesn't accept parameters. If these methods are intended to throw errors, they should be declared as func attach() async throws and func detach() async throws. If they are also supposed to return an ARTErrorInfo, the return type should be specified after ->.

Apply this diff to correct the method signatures:

-func attach() async throws(ARTErrorInfo)
-func detach() async throws(ARTErrorInfo)
+func attach() async throws
+func detach() async throws

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Tests/AblyChatTests/RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift (4)

180-212: LGTM: Comprehensive new test for discontinuity events

This new test case, attach_uponSuccess_emitsPendingDiscontinuityEvents, is a valuable addition to the test suite. It thoroughly checks the behavior of emitting pending discontinuity events upon successful attachment. The test structure is clear, and it makes good use of Swift's concurrency features and modern testing syntax.

The TODO comment on line 200 references a GitHub issue for clarification on the intended behavior. This is a good practice for tracking uncertainties in the specification.

Consider updating the test once the behavior is clarified in the referenced GitHub issue (https://github.com/ably/specification/pull/200/files#r1781917231).


Line range hint 449-464: LGTM: Well-updated transition test with pending enhancement

The detach_transitionsToDetaching test has been successfully updated to leverage Swift's concurrency model. The use of async let for the status change subscription is efficient. The assertions using #expect and #require provide robust checks for the expected transition to the detaching state.

The TODO comment on line 446 references a GitHub issue (#48) for implementing the part related to "transient disconnect timeouts". This is a good practice for tracking pending enhancements.

Consider implementing the transient disconnect timeouts functionality and updating this test accordingly once the referenced issue is addressed.


Line range hint 507-538: LGTM: Well-updated test for partial failure scenario

The detach_whenAContributorFailsToDetachAndEntersFailed_detachesRemainingContributorsAndTransitionsToFailed test has been successfully updated to leverage Swift's concurrency model. The use of async let for the status change subscription is efficient. The assertions using #expect and #require provide robust checks for the expected behavior in this partial failure scenario.

The TODO comment on line 530 references an outstanding question in the specification (https://github.com/ably/specification/pull/200/files#r1763792152) regarding whether to use errorReason or the contributor detach thrown error. This is a good practice for tracking uncertainties in the specification.

Once the specification question is resolved, update the test to reflect the clarified behavior.


725-968: LGTM: Excellent addition of comprehensive tests

The new tests added from line 725 onwards significantly enhance the test suite for the RoomLifecycleManager. These tests cover various scenarios related to contributor updates and state changes, including:

  1. Handling of resumed flags in contributor updates
  2. Recording of pending discontinuity events
  3. Emitting discontinuity events
  4. Handling of contributor state changes (e.g., to ATTACHED, FAILED, SUSPENDED)

The tests make good use of Swift's concurrency features and modern testing syntax. They provide thorough coverage of the specified behaviors and edge cases.

There are a few TODO comments (e.g., lines 836, 841, 941) that reference GitHub issues for pending work or clarifications. This is a good practice for tracking areas that need further attention.

As the TODO items are addressed and the referenced GitHub issues are resolved, remember to update the corresponding tests to reflect any clarified behaviors or new implementations.

Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift (3)

Line range hint 293-303: Attach contributors concurrently to improve performance

In the performAttachOperation method, contributors are being attached sequentially, which might increase the total attach time:

for contributor in contributors {
    do {
        logger.log(message: "Attaching contributor \(contributor)", level: .info)
        try await contributor.channel.attach()
    } catch let contributorAttachError {
        // Error handling code...
    }
}

Attaching contributors concurrently can improve performance, especially with multiple contributors. You can use withThrowingTaskGroup:

try await withThrowingTaskGroup(of: Void.self) { group in
    for contributor in contributors {
        group.addTask {
            logger.log(message: "Attaching contributor \(contributor)", level: .info)
            try await contributor.channel.attach()
        }
    }
    try await group.waitForAll()
}

This change initiates all attach operations simultaneously, potentially reducing the total time to attach all contributors.


Line range hint 372-385: Detach non-failed contributors concurrently

In the detachNonFailedContributors method, contributors are detached sequentially within a loop:

for contributor in contributors where await (contributor.channel.state) != .failed {
    // Retry loop
    while true {
        do {
            logger.log(message: "Detaching non-failed contributor \(contributor)", level: .info)
            try await contributor.channel.detach()
            break
        } catch {
            // Error handling and loop repeats
        }
    }
}

Detaching contributors concurrently can enhance efficiency. You can modify the code using withTaskGroup:

await withTaskGroup(of: Void.self) { group in
    for contributor in contributors {
        let state = await contributor.channel.state
        if state != .failed {
            group.addTask {
                // Retry loop
                while true {
                    do {
                        logger.log(message: "Detaching non-failed contributor \(contributor)", level: .info)
                        try await contributor.channel.detach()
                        break
                    } catch {
                        // Error handling and loop repeats
                    }
                }
            }
        }
    }
    await group.waitForAll()
}

This approach detaches all non-failed contributors in parallel, which can reduce the overall detachment time.


Line range hint 329-353: Detach contributors concurrently in performDetachOperation

In the performDetachOperation, contributors are detached sequentially:

var firstDetachError: Error?
for contributor in contributors {
    logger.log(message: "Detaching contributor \(contributor)", level: .info)
    do {
        try await contributor.channel.detach()
    } catch {
        // Error handling code...
    }
}

To improve efficiency, consider detaching contributors concurrently:

var firstDetachError: Error?
try await withThrowingTaskGroup(of: Void.self) { group in
    for contributor in contributors {
        group.addTask {
            logger.log(message: "Detaching contributor \(contributor)", level: .info)
            do {
                try await contributor.channel.detach()
            } catch {
                // Error handling code
                throw error
            }
        }
    }
    do {
        try await group.waitForAll()
    } catch {
        if firstDetachError == nil {
            firstDetachError = error
        }
    }
}
if let firstDetachError {
    // CHA-RL2f
    throw firstDetachError
}

This modification detaches all contributors simultaneously, potentially reducing the total time required for the detachment process.

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Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift (10)
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#67
File: Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift:225-230
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T19:44:59.950Z
Learning: In the `ably-chat-swift` project, `swift-async-algorithms` provides the `async` property on collections, allowing for asynchronous operations like `contributors.async`.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#67
File: Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift:217-220
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T19:44:34.032Z
Learning: In `RoomLifecycleManager`, handling of missing `stateChange.reason` when `stateChange.resumed` is `false` is being tracked in issue #74. Future reviews should be aware of this planned work.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#67
File: Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift:235-237
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T19:47:18.144Z
Learning: When code includes a TODO comment referencing an issue, it indicates that the issue is being tracked, and no further action is needed.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#67
File: Tests/AblyChatTests/RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift:941-941
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T19:46:16.467Z
Learning: When a TODO comment references an existing GitHub issue, it's acceptable to leave it in the code without requesting its removal.
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PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#67
File: Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift:255-257
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T19:44:06.841Z
Learning: In `RoomLifecycleManager`, handling of missing `reason` in `SUSPENDED` state will be addressed in issue #74.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#54
File: Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift:0-0
Timestamp: 2024-09-18T18:34:37.252Z
Learning: In `RoomLifecycleManager`, handling of unexpected contributor states after attach failure will be addressed in issue #49.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#54
File: Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift:262-262
Timestamp: 2024-09-18T18:29:03.379Z
Learning: When a TODO comment references an associated GitHub issue, recognize that the issue is being tracked and avoid suggesting fixes that are already planned.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#67
File: Tests/AblyChatTests/RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift:836-836
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T19:46:04.461Z
Learning: Before suggesting the removal of TODO comments, check if they reference existing GitHub issues that track the pending work.
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PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#9
File: Sources/AblyChat/RoomStatus.swift:3-33
Timestamp: 2024-08-28T13:01:11.701Z
Learning: When reviewing code, avoid commenting on TODOs that already have a linked GitHub issue, as per the user's preference.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#67
File: Tests/AblyChatTests/Mocks/MockRoomLifecycleContributorChannel.swift:98-102
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T19:43:27.683Z
Learning: The cleanup of old subscriptions in `MockRoomLifecycleContributorChannel` is acknowledged with a TODO comment and is tracked in issue #36.
Tests/AblyChatTests/RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift (6)
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#54
File: Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift:0-0
Timestamp: 2024-09-18T18:34:37.252Z
Learning: In `RoomLifecycleManager`, handling of unexpected contributor states after attach failure will be addressed in issue #49.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#54
File: Tests/AblyChatTests/RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift:627-631
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T12:55:21.968Z
Learning: The closure `detachImpl` in `RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift` functions as intended without external state variables to track invocation count.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#54
File: Tests/AblyChatTests/RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift:335-335
Timestamp: 2024-09-23T19:56:39.435Z
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PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#54
File: Tests/AblyChatTests/RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift:499-504
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T12:47:28.179Z
Learning: In test closures, parameters like `callCount` may be used to track invocation counts correctly across invocations.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#67
File: Tests/AblyChatTests/RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift:941-941
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T19:46:16.467Z
Learning: When a TODO comment references an existing GitHub issue, it's acceptable to leave it in the code without requesting its removal.
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PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#67
File: Tests/AblyChatTests/RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift:836-836
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T19:46:04.461Z
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Tests/AblyChatTests/RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift (17)

32-36: LGTM: Enhanced test flexibility

The additions to the createManager function provide more control over the test scenarios, allowing for better coverage of different states. The explicit async return type is also a good practice in Swift concurrency.


52-52: LGTM: Simplified return type

The change to return MockRoomLifecycleContributor directly improves type clarity and makes the function's purpose more evident.


63-69: LGTM: Useful async helper function

The waitForManager function is a valuable addition that facilitates testing of asynchronous behavior. It provides a clean way to ensure that the manager has processed a state change before proceeding with assertions in tests.


77-79: LGTM: Updated to async testing

The test has been successfully updated to use async/await syntax, which is appropriate for testing asynchronous behavior. The use of #expect for assertions is also a good modernization of the test syntax.


84-86: LGTM: Consistent async test update

The error_startsAsNil test has been updated in line with the previous test, using async/await syntax and the #expect assertion. This maintains consistency across the test suite.


Line range hint 96-103: LGTM: Comprehensive test update

The attach_whenAlreadyAttached test has been successfully updated to use async/await syntax. The createManager call now includes the new parameter for setting the initial state, which enhances test specificity. The use of #expect for assertions maintains consistency with other updated tests.


Line range hint 109-118: LGTM: Well-updated error condition test

The attach_whenReleasing test has been properly updated to use async/await syntax. The createManager call correctly uses the new parameter to set up the initial state. The use of #expect with a throws clause is an excellent way to test for the expected error condition.


Line range hint 124-133: LGTM: Consistent test update

The attach_whenReleased test has been updated in line with the previous tests. It now uses async/await syntax, the updated createManager call, and the #expect assertion with a throws clause. This maintains consistency and modernizes the test implementation.


Line range hint 141-155: LGTM: Excellent use of Swift concurrency

The attach_transitionsToAttaching test has been updated to make full use of Swift's concurrency features. The use of async let for concurrent operations is particularly noteworthy, allowing for efficient testing of asynchronous behavior. The updated assertions using #expect and #require provide clear and robust checks. This is a well-crafted test that effectively verifies the transition to the attaching state.


Line range hint 163-179: LGTM: Comprehensive async test update

The test has been successfully updated to leverage Swift's concurrency model. The use of async let for the status change subscription is efficient. The assertions using #expect and #require provide robust checks for the expected behavior. This update maintains the test's effectiveness while modernizing its implementation.


Line range hint 229-253: LGTM: Well-updated test for failure scenario

The attach_whenContributorFailsToAttachAndEntersSuspended_transitionsToSuspended test has been successfully updated to use Swift's concurrency features. The use of async let for the status change and room attach result is efficient. The assertions using #expect and #require provide robust checks for the expected behavior in this failure scenario. The test effectively verifies the transition to the suspended state and the propagation of the error.


Line range hint 280-323: LGTM: Comprehensive update for failure scenario test

The attach_whenContributorFailsToAttachAndEntersFailed_transitionsToFailed test has been successfully updated to leverage Swift's concurrency model. The use of async let for the status change subscription is efficient. The assertions using #expect and #require provide robust checks for the expected behavior in this failure scenario. The test effectively verifies the transition to the failed state and the propagation of the error. This update maintains the test's effectiveness while modernizing its implementation.


Line range hint 331-343: LGTM: Well-updated test for detach behavior

The attach_whenAttachPutsChannelIntoFailedState_detachesAllNonFailedChannels test has been successfully updated to use async/await syntax. The createManager call correctly uses the new parameter structure. The assertions using #expect provide clear checks for the expected detach behavior on different contributors. This update maintains the test's effectiveness while aligning it with the modern Swift concurrency model.


Line range hint 373-380: LGTM: Properly updated retry behavior test

The attach_whenChannelDetachTriggered_ifADetachFailsItIsRetriedUntilSuccess test has been successfully updated to use async/await syntax. The createManager call correctly uses the new parameter structure. The assertion using #expect provides a clear check for the expected retry behavior. This update aligns the test with the modern Swift concurrency model while maintaining its effectiveness in verifying the retry logic.


Line range hint 389-396: LGTM: Consistent update for detach test

The detach_whenAlreadyDetached test has been properly updated to use async/await syntax. The createManager call correctly uses the new parameter structure to set up the initial detached state. The assertion using #expect provides a clear check for the expected behavior. This update aligns the test with the modern Swift concurrency model while maintaining its effectiveness in verifying the no-op behavior when already detached.


Line range hint 402-439: LGTM: Consistent updates for error condition tests

The detach_whenReleasing, detach_whenReleased, and detach_whenFailed tests have all been successfully updated to use async/await syntax. The createManager calls correctly use the new parameter structure to set up the initial states. The assertions using #expect with throws clauses provide clear checks for the expected error conditions. These updates align the tests with the modern Swift concurrency model while maintaining their effectiveness in verifying the appropriate error handling in various states.


Line range hint 470-485: LGTM: Comprehensive update for successful detach scenario

The detach_detachesAllContributors_andWhenTheyAllDetachSuccessfully_transitionsToDetached test has been successfully updated to leverage Swift's concurrency model. The use of async let for the status change subscription is efficient. The assertions using #expect and #require provide robust checks for the expected behavior, verifying that all contributors are detached and the room transitions to the detached state. This update maintains the test's effectiveness while modernizing its implementation.

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Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift (2)

43-93: LGTM: Improved thread-safety and state management

The transition to an actor model for RoomLifecycleManager and the introduction of ContributorAnnotation and ContributorAnnotations structures significantly enhance thread-safety and state management. The asynchronous initialization process is a good approach to ensure proper setup.

Consider adding a brief comment explaining the purpose of the hasOperationInProgress property, as its usage might not be immediately clear to other developers.


Line range hint 95-174: LGTM: Comprehensive initialization process

The initialization methods, including the test-only variants, provide a robust setup for the RoomLifecycleManager. The asynchronous setup of state change subscriptions for all contributors ensures that the manager is ready to handle state changes as soon as it's initialized.

Consider adding a comment explaining the rationale behind using @Sendable in the closure on line 162. This will help other developers understand the concurrency implications.

Tests/AblyChatTests/RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift (1)

180-212: Well-implemented test for CHA-RL1g2 specification

The new attach_uponSuccess_emitsPendingDiscontinuityEvents test case is a valuable addition that covers the specified behavior in CHA-RL1g2. It correctly uses async/await syntax and the enhanced createManager function.

The test comprehensively checks both the emission of discontinuity events and the clearing of pending events. This ensures that the RoomLifecycleManager correctly handles pending discontinuity events upon successful attachment.

Consider wrapping the zip operation in a guard statement to handle potential mismatched array lengths more gracefully:

-            for (emitDiscontinuityArgument, expectedArgument) in zip(emitDiscontinuityArguments, expectedPendingDiscontinuityEvents) {
-                #expect(emitDiscontinuityArgument === expectedArgument)
-            }
+            guard emitDiscontinuityArguments.count == expectedPendingDiscontinuityEvents.count else {
+                XCTFail("Mismatch in number of emitted and expected discontinuity events")
+                return
+            }
+            for (emitDiscontinuityArgument, expectedArgument) in zip(emitDiscontinuityArguments, expectedPendingDiscontinuityEvents) {
+                #expect(emitDiscontinuityArgument === expectedArgument)
+            }

This change would provide a more informative failure message if the arrays have different lengths.

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Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift (10)
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#67
File: Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift:235-237
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T19:47:18.144Z
Learning: When code includes a TODO comment referencing an issue, it indicates that the issue is being tracked, and no further action is needed.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#54
File: Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift:262-262
Timestamp: 2024-09-18T18:29:03.379Z
Learning: When a TODO comment references an associated GitHub issue, recognize that the issue is being tracked and avoid suggesting fixes that are already planned.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#67
File: Tests/AblyChatTests/RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift:941-941
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T19:46:16.467Z
Learning: When a TODO comment references an existing GitHub issue, it's acceptable to leave it in the code without requesting its removal.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#9
File: Sources/AblyChat/RoomStatus.swift:3-33
Timestamp: 2024-08-28T13:01:11.701Z
Learning: When reviewing code, avoid commenting on TODOs that already have a linked GitHub issue, as per the user's preference.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#67
File: Tests/AblyChatTests/RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift:836-836
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T19:46:04.461Z
Learning: Before suggesting the removal of TODO comments, check if they reference existing GitHub issues that track the pending work.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#67
File: Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift:217-220
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T19:44:34.032Z
Learning: In `RoomLifecycleManager`, handling of missing `stateChange.reason` when `stateChange.resumed` is `false` is being tracked in issue #74. Future reviews should be aware of this planned work.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#54
File: Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift:0-0
Timestamp: 2024-09-18T18:34:37.252Z
Learning: In `RoomLifecycleManager`, handling of unexpected contributor states after attach failure will be addressed in issue #49.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#67
File: Tests/AblyChatTests/Mocks/MockRoomLifecycleContributorChannel.swift:98-102
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T19:43:27.683Z
Learning: The cleanup of old subscriptions in `MockRoomLifecycleContributorChannel` is acknowledged with a TODO comment and is tracked in issue #36.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#67
File: Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift:255-257
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T19:44:06.841Z
Learning: In `RoomLifecycleManager`, handling of missing `reason` in `SUSPENDED` state will be addressed in issue #74.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#67
File: Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift:225-230
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T19:44:59.950Z
Learning: In the `ably-chat-swift` project, `swift-async-algorithms` provides the `async` property on collections, allowing for asynchronous operations like `contributors.async`.
Tests/AblyChatTests/RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift (13)
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#67
File: Tests/AblyChatTests/RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift:941-941
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T19:46:16.467Z
Learning: When a TODO comment references an existing GitHub issue, it's acceptable to leave it in the code without requesting its removal.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#67
File: Tests/AblyChatTests/RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift:836-836
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T19:46:04.461Z
Learning: Before suggesting the removal of TODO comments, check if they reference existing GitHub issues that track the pending work.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#54
File: Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift:262-262
Timestamp: 2024-09-18T18:29:03.379Z
Learning: When a TODO comment references an associated GitHub issue, recognize that the issue is being tracked and avoid suggesting fixes that are already planned.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#67
File: Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift:235-237
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T19:47:18.144Z
Learning: When code includes a TODO comment referencing an issue, it indicates that the issue is being tracked, and no further action is needed.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#9
File: Sources/AblyChat/RoomStatus.swift:3-33
Timestamp: 2024-08-28T13:01:11.701Z
Learning: When reviewing code, avoid commenting on TODOs that already have a linked GitHub issue, as per the user's preference.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#9
File: Sources/AblyChat/Metadata.swift:1-2
Timestamp: 2024-08-28T12:07:31.704Z
Learning: When reviewing code, avoid commenting on TODOs that already have a linked GitHub issue, as per the user's preference.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#54
File: Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift:0-0
Timestamp: 2024-09-18T18:34:37.252Z
Learning: In `RoomLifecycleManager`, handling of unexpected contributor states after attach failure will be addressed in issue #49.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#67
File: Tests/AblyChatTests/Mocks/MockRoomLifecycleContributorChannel.swift:98-102
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T19:43:27.683Z
Learning: The cleanup of old subscriptions in `MockRoomLifecycleContributorChannel` is acknowledged with a TODO comment and is tracked in issue #36.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#67
File: Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift:217-220
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T19:44:34.032Z
Learning: In `RoomLifecycleManager`, handling of missing `stateChange.reason` when `stateChange.resumed` is `false` is being tracked in issue #74. Future reviews should be aware of this planned work.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#67
File: Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift:255-257
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T19:44:06.841Z
Learning: In `RoomLifecycleManager`, handling of missing `reason` in `SUSPENDED` state will be addressed in issue #74.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#54
File: Tests/AblyChatTests/RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift:627-631
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T12:55:21.968Z
Learning: The closure `detachImpl` in `RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift` functions as intended without external state variables to track invocation count.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#54
File: Tests/AblyChatTests/RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift:335-335
Timestamp: 2024-09-23T19:56:39.435Z
Learning: In Swift Testing, test method names do not need to start with `test`.
Learnt from: lawrence-forooghian
PR: ably-labs/ably-chat-swift#54
File: Tests/AblyChatTests/RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift:499-504
Timestamp: 2024-10-01T12:47:28.179Z
Learning: In test closures, parameters like `callCount` may be used to track invocation counts correctly across invocations.
🔇 Additional comments (26)
Sources/AblyChat/RoomLifecycleManager.swift (8)

Line range hint 1-41: LGTM: Improved protocol definitions and async support

The changes to the RoomLifecycleContributorChannel protocol and the addition of the RoomLifecycleContributor protocol enhance the asynchronous capabilities of the system. The use of AsyncAlgorithms and the new subscribeToState method provide a more robust way to handle state changes.


Line range hint 176-208: LGTM: Useful debug-only additions

The debug-only methods and properties, such as testsOnly_pendingDiscontinuityEvents and testsOnly_subscribeToHandledContributorStateChanges, provide valuable tools for testing and debugging the RoomLifecycleManager's behavior. These additions will help ensure the correct implementation of the room lifecycle specification.


210-296: LGTM: Comprehensive state change handling

The didReceiveStateChange method provides a thorough implementation of CHA-RL4b's contributor state change handling. It correctly handles various state changes and updates the manager's state accordingly.

The TODO comments referencing GitHub issues #49 and #74 indicate areas that need further attention:

  1. Handling of state assumptions in a multi-threaded environment (issue Address concurrency-related issues not addressed by feature spec #49)
  2. Deciding the appropriate action when stateChange.reason is nil (issue Decide correct behaviour when ably-cocoa emits a state change without an error when there should be one #74)

These issues are being tracked and will be addressed in future updates.


Line range hint 298-313: LGTM: Clear status management

The changeStatus and emitStatusChange methods provide a clear and concise way to update the manager's status and notify subscribers of changes. The implementation is straightforward and effective.


Line range hint 315-372: LGTM: Comprehensive ATTACH operation implementation

The performAttachOperation method provides a thorough implementation of CHA-RL1's ATTACH operation. It correctly handles various initial states, attaches all contributors, and implements proper error handling for different scenarios.

Note: There's a TODO comment on line 359 about implementing the "asynchronously with respect to CHA-RL1h4" part of CHA-RL1h5. This is being tracked in issue #50 and should be addressed in a future update.


Line range hint 374-407: LGTM: Correct implementation of discontinuity events and detachment

The emitPendingDiscontinuityEvents and detachNonFailedContributors methods are well-implemented and follow the specification correctly. They handle the emission of pending discontinuity events and the detachment of non-failed contributors as expected.


Line range hint 409-502: LGTM: Comprehensive DETACH operation implementation

The performDetachOperation method provides a thorough implementation of CHA-RL2's DETACH operation. It correctly handles various initial states, detaches all contributors, and implements proper error handling for different scenarios.

Note: There's a TODO comment on line 478 about determining the correct wait time for retrying detachment. This is referenced in a GitHub discussion (ably/specification#200 (comment)) and should be addressed in a future update.


Line range hint 504-551: LGTM: Comprehensive RELEASE operation implementation

The performReleaseOperation method provides a thorough implementation of CHA-RL3's RELEASE operation. It correctly handles various initial states and releases all contributors as expected.

There are two TODO items that need attention in future updates:

  1. Handling task cancellation (part of the broader issue Decide how our SDK should interact with Swift Task cancellation #29)
  2. Determining the correct wait time for retrying detachment (referenced in chat: room lifecycle specification specification#200 (comment))

These issues should be addressed to improve the robustness and correctness of the implementation.

Tests/AblyChatTests/RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift (18)

32-37: Improved flexibility in createManager function

The updates to the createManager function enhance its capabilities for testing various scenarios. The new parameters allow for more precise control over the initial state of the manager, which is crucial for comprehensive testing.


52-52: Simplified return type in createContributor function

The change in return type to MockRoomLifecycleContributor improves consistency with the mock objects used in testing and enhances code readability.


63-69: Well-implemented waitForManager helper function

The new waitForManager function is a valuable addition to the test suite. It provides a clean abstraction for handling asynchronous state changes in the manager, which will improve the readability and maintainability of the test cases.


77-77: Successfully updated current_startsAsInitialized test

The test has been correctly adapted to use async/await syntax, ensuring compatibility with the updated RoomLifecycleManager implementation.


84-84: Successfully updated error_startsAsNil test

The test has been correctly adapted to use async/await syntax, maintaining compatibility with the updated RoomLifecycleManager implementation.


96-96: Successfully updated attach_whenAlreadyAttached test

The test has been correctly adapted to use async/await syntax and utilizes the enhanced createManager function. These changes ensure that the test remains valid and comprehensive with the updated RoomLifecycleManager implementation.


109-109: Successfully updated attach_whenReleasing test

The test has been correctly adapted to use async/await syntax and utilizes the enhanced createManager function. These changes ensure that the test remains valid with the updated RoomLifecycleManager implementation.


124-124: Successfully updated attach_whenReleased test

The test has been correctly adapted to use async/await syntax and utilizes the enhanced createManager function. These changes ensure that the test remains valid with the updated RoomLifecycleManager implementation.


141-141: Successfully updated attach_transitionsToAttaching test with good concurrency practices

The test has been correctly adapted to use async/await syntax and utilizes the enhanced createManager function. The use of async let for concurrent operations is a good practice for testing asynchronous behavior, ensuring that the test accurately captures the state transitions.


163-163: Successfully updated attach_attachesAllContributors_andWhenTheyAllAttachSuccessfully_transitionsToAttached test

The test has been correctly adapted to use async/await syntax and utilizes the enhanced createManager function. The use of async let for concurrent operations ensures that the test accurately captures the behavior of attaching multiple contributors simultaneously.


229-229: Successfully updated attach_whenContributorFailsToAttachAndEntersSuspended_transitionsToSuspended test

The test has been correctly adapted to use async/await syntax and utilizes the enhanced createManager function. The use of async let for concurrent operations ensures that the test accurately captures the behavior of the manager when a contributor fails to attach and enters a suspended state.


280-280: Successfully updated attach_whenContributorFailsToAttachAndEntersFailed_transitionsToFailed test

The test has been correctly adapted to use async/await syntax and utilizes the enhanced createManager function. The use of async let for concurrent operations ensures that the test accurately captures the behavior of the manager when a contributor fails to attach and enters a failed state.


331-331: Successfully updated attach_whenAttachPutsChannelIntoFailedState_detachesAllNonFailedChannels test

The test has been correctly adapted to use async/await syntax and utilizes the enhanced createManager function. These changes ensure that the test remains valid and continues to verify the correct behavior of detaching non-failed channels when a channel enters a failed state during attachment.


373-373: Successfully updated attach_whenChannelDetachTriggered_ifADetachFailsItIsRetriedUntilSuccess test

The test has been correctly adapted to use async/await syntax and utilizes the enhanced createManager function. These changes ensure that the test remains valid and continues to verify the retry behavior for failed detach operations during the attachment process.


389-389: Successfully updated detach_whenAlreadyDetached test

The test has been correctly adapted to use async/await syntax and utilizes the enhanced createManager function. These changes ensure that the test remains valid and continues to verify the correct behavior when attempting to detach an already detached room.


402-402: Successfully updated detach_whenReleasing test

The test has been correctly adapted to use async/await syntax and utilizes the enhanced createManager function. These changes ensure that the test remains valid and continues to verify the correct error handling when attempting to detach a releasing room.


417-417: Successfully updated detach_whenReleased test

The test has been correctly adapted to use async/await syntax and utilizes the enhanced createManager function. These changes ensure that the test remains valid and continues to verify the correct error handling when attempting to detach a released room.


Line range hint 1-968: Comprehensive update to RoomLifecycleManagerTests

The changes to RoomLifecycleManagerTests.swift represent a significant improvement in the test suite's capabilities:

  1. Transition to async/await: The entire file has been updated to use modern Swift concurrency patterns, improving readability and maintainability.
  2. Enhanced test scenarios: New test cases have been added to cover additional scenarios, particularly around handling contributor events and state changes.
  3. Improved flexibility: The createManager function now accepts more parameters, allowing for more precise test setups.
  4. Better concurrency testing: The use of async let in many tests ensures that asynchronous behaviors are accurately captured and verified.

These changes collectively enhance the robustness of the test suite and its ability to verify the correct behavior of the RoomLifecycleManager under various conditions.

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LGTM

@lawrence-forooghian lawrence-forooghian merged commit 1eb6d9f into main Oct 9, 2024
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@lawrence-forooghian lawrence-forooghian deleted the 53-room-lifecycle-monitoring branch October 9, 2024 15:06
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Implement the Room Lifecycle Monitoring part of the spec
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