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-            Sustainable Business Model for Service Communities and DAOs
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-          A decentralized, blockchain-driven solution with Enhanced Privacy through Zero Knowledge Proofs that streamlines
-          interaction between <strong>businesses</strong>, <strong>professionals</strong>, and <strong>communities</strong>.
+          The future of work is being transformed by the relationship between <strong>Professionals</strong>,
+          <strong>Communities</strong> and <strong>Businesses</strong>. Kyōdō
+          Protocol facilitates trusted connections between these professional parties with a decentralized, blockchain-driven
+          solution. The protocol provides a payments system with verifiable credentials and proof of curriculum using Zero
+          Knowledge Proofs
+          (ZKP) to enhance privacy
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