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 Welcome to the Radius documentation! Here you'll find everything you need to know about Radius, from getting started to advanced topics.
 
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-Radius enables developers and IT operators to collaborate on delivering and managing cloud-native applications. With Radius, teams can understand "what is my application" and "how is it running" across dev, cloud, edge, and on-prem. Plus, teams can ensure their application infrastructure meets cost, operations, and security requirements. Open-source and multi-cloud, Radius is the cloud-native application platform for cloud-native teams to deliver and manage applications anywhere.
+Radius is a cloud native application platform.  It enables developers and IT operators to collaborate on delivering and managing cloud-native applications. With Radius, teams can easily understand their applications and how applications are running environments including dev, cloud, edge, and on-prem. Plus, teams can ensure their application infrastructure meets cost, operations, and security requirements. Open-source and multi-cloud, Radius is the cloud-native application platform for delivering and managing applications anywhere.
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-  Learn about the background and concepts behind Radius with in-depth explanations. We'll cover the main concepts and how Radius works, so you can understand how to use Radius effectively.
+  Learn about the background and concepts behind Radius with in-depth explanations. We'll cover the main concepts and how Radius works, so you have the broader context to deeply understand Radius adn use it most effectively.
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   {{< card header="**🧾 Reference**" footer="[**Visit reference material →**]({{< ref guides >}})" >}}
   Refer to detailed information on Radius resources, APIs, FAQs, and more. Reference material is useful for looking up specific information about Radius when you need it.