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Co-authored-by: Aaron Crawfis <[email protected]>

docs/content/tutorials/helm/index.md

@@ -12,8 +12,6 @@ This tutorial will teach you the following about Radius:
 
 * How to use update a Helm chart to include its resources in a Radius application
 * How to use features like Recipes and Connections within Kubernetes YAML or Helm.
-
-
 {{< image src="diagram.png" alt="Diagram of the application and its resources" width="500px" >}}
 
 ## Prerequisites
@@ -108,7 +106,7 @@ You can deploy this application for the first time by following these steps:
 - Install the Helm chart.
 
 {{< alert title="💡 Redis" color="info" >}}
-For now you're not going to actually deploy Redis, the URL in this step is fake. You will deploy Redis using a Recipe later in the tutorial that will replace the fake URL contained within `redis-secret`.
+For now you're not going to actually deploy Redis and the URL in this step is fake. You will deploy Redis using a Recipe later in the tutorial that will replace the fake URL contained within `redis-secret` with an actual container and URL.
 {{< /alert >}}
 
 Complete these steps by running the following commands:
@@ -121,11 +119,11 @@ helm upgrade demo ./Chart -n demo --install
 
 The output should look similar to the following:
 
-```txt
+```
 > kubectl create namespace demo
 namespace/demo created
 
-> kubectl create secret generic --namespace demo --from-literal=url=redis://redis-master:6379 redis-secret 
+> kubectl create secret generic --namespace demo --from-literal=url=redis://fake-server redis-secret 
 secret/redis-secret created
 
 > helm upgrade demo ./Chart -n demo --install
@@ -150,7 +148,7 @@ kubectl get all -n demo
 
 The output should look similar to the following:
 
-```txt
+```
 > kubectl get all -n demo
 NAME                       READY   STATUS    RESTARTS   AGE
 pod/webapp-79d5dfb99-vhj9g   1/1     Running   0          2m48s
@@ -210,7 +208,7 @@ helm upgrade demo ./Chart -n demo --install
 
 The output should look like:
 
-```txt
+```
 > helm upgrade demo ./Chart -n demo --install
 Release "demo" has been upgraded. Happy Helming!
 NAME: demo
@@ -231,7 +229,7 @@ kubectl get all -n demo
 
 The output should look similar to the following:
 
-```txt
+```
 > kubectl get all -n demo
 NAME                       READY   STATUS    RESTARTS   AGE
 pod/webapp-79d5dfb99-mv6q9   1/1     Running   0          10m
@@ -253,7 +251,7 @@ rad app graph -a demo -g default-demo
 
 The output should look like this:
 
-```txt
+```
 > rad app graph -a demo -g default-demo
 Displaying application: demo
 
@@ -302,9 +300,9 @@ default   Applications.Datastores/redisCaches     bicep
 The recipe for `Applications.Datastores/redisCaches` is what you will use in this example.
 
 {{< alert title="💡 Recipes" color="info" >}}
- Radius includes Recipes for local development when you use `rad init`. These **local-dev** Recipes run popular OSS technologies as containerized infrastructure without requiring a cloud account.
+ Radius includes Recipes for local development when you use `rad init`. These [**local-dev**](https://github.com/radius-project/recipes/tree/main/local-dev) Recipes run popular OSS technologies as containerized infrastructure without requiring a cloud account.
 
- In a production environment you can substitute recipes that will create cloud or on-premises dependencies instead.
+In a production environment you can substitute recipes that will create cloud or on-premises dependencies instead.
 {{< /alert >}}
 
 Make sure the `app.yaml` file from `./demo/Chart/templates/app.yaml` is open in your editor. At the bottom of the file add the following text, including the `---`:
@@ -334,7 +332,7 @@ helm upgrade demo ./Chart -n demo --install
 
 The output should look like:
 
-```txt
+```
 > helm upgrade demo ./Chart -n demo --install
 Release "demo" has been upgraded. Happy Helming!
 NAME: demo
@@ -355,7 +353,7 @@ kubectl get all -n demo
 
 The output should look similar to the following:
 
-```txt
+```
 > kubectl get all -n demo
 
 pod/redis-r5tcrra3d7uh6-7bcd8b8d8d-jmgn4   2/2     Running   0          51s
@@ -390,7 +388,7 @@ rad app graph -a demo -g default-demo
 
 The output should look like this:
 
-```txt
+```
 > rad app graph -a demo -g default-demo
 Displaying application: demo
 
@@ -424,7 +422,7 @@ kubectl get secret -n demo redis-secret -o yaml
 
 The output should look like the following:
 
-```txt
+```
 >kubectl get secret -n demo redis-secret -o yaml
 apiVersion: v1
 data:
@@ -553,7 +551,7 @@ kubectl get all -n demo
 
 The output should look like:
 
-```txt
+```
 > kubectl get all -n demo
 NAME                                       READY   STATUS    RESTARTS   AGE
 pod/redis-r5tcrra3d7uh6-7bcd8b8d8d-jmgn4   2/2     Running   0          20m
@@ -586,7 +584,7 @@ rad app graph -a demo -g default-demo
 
 The output should look like the example below:
 
-```txt
+```
 > rad app graph -a demo -g default-demo
 Displaying application: demo
 
@@ -627,7 +625,7 @@ Congrats! You're running your first Radius app.
 
 You can use the homepage to view information about the container and its settings.
 
-Navigate to the TODO List tab and test out the application. Using the TODO page will update the saved state in Redis.
+Navigate to the ToDo List tab and test out the application. Using the ToDo page will update the saved state in Redis.
 
 <img src="./demo-with-todolist.png" alt="Screenshot of the todolist" width=500>
 <br /><br />
@@ -649,4 +647,4 @@ In summary, this tutorial walked through a hands-on example to show you how-to:
 - Use Connections to automate the management of connection information.
 
 <br>
-{{< button text="Next step: Radius Tutorials" page="tutorials" >}}
+{{< button text="Next step: Try another tutorial" page="tutorials" >}}