Merge pull request wikimedia#3365 from wikimedia/bug/T238872

Update education panel copy
montehurd · Nov 25, 2019 · f627320 · f627320
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diff --git a/Wikipedia/Code/Panels.swift b/Wikipedia/Code/Panels.swift
@@ -212,7 +212,7 @@ class DiffEducationalPanelViewController: ScrollableEducationPanelViewController
         super.viewDidLoad()
         image = UIImage(named: "panel-compare-revisions")
         heading = WMFLocalizedString("panel-compare-revisions-title", value: "Comparing revisions", comment: "Title for educational panel about comparing revisions")
-        subheading = WMFLocalizedString("panel-compare-revisions-text", value: "Comparing revisions helps to show how an article has changed over time. When you compare two revisions of an article, the differences between them are generated. ", comment: "Text for educational panel about comparing revisions")
+        subheading = WMFLocalizedString("panel-compare-revisions-text", value: "Comparing revisions helps to show how an article has changed over time. Comparing two revisions of an article will show the difference between those revisions by highlighting any content that was changed.", comment: "Text for educational panel about comparing revisions")
         primaryButtonTitle = CommonStrings.gotItButtonTitle
     }
 }

diff --git a/Wikipedia/Localizations/en.lproj/Localizable.strings b/Wikipedia/Localizations/en.lproj/Localizable.strings
@@ -536,7 +536,7 @@
 "page-read-in-other-languages" = "Available in {{PLURAL:$1|$1 other language|$1 other languages}}";
 "page-similar-titles" = "Similar pages";
 "page-talk-page" = "View talk page";
-"panel-compare-revisions-text" = "Comparing revisions helps to show how an article has changed over time. When you compare two revisions of an article, the differences between them are generated. ";
+"panel-compare-revisions-text" = "Comparing revisions helps to show how an article has changed over time. Comparing two revisions of an article will show the difference between those revisions by highlighting any content that was changed.";
 "panel-compare-revisions-title" = "Comparing revisions";
 "pictured" = "pictured";
 "places-accessibility-clear-saved-searches" = "Clear saved searches";

diff --git a/Wikipedia/iOS Native Localizations/en.lproj/Localizable.strings b/Wikipedia/iOS Native Localizations/en.lproj/Localizable.strings