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site/en/deploy_and_maintain/deploy_s3.md

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 id: deploy_s3.md
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-# Deploy Amazon S3 Storage
+# Set up S3 Storage for Milvus
 
-Milvus supports Amazon Simple Storage Service (S3) for data persistence of insert log files and index files. This page shows you how to deploy S3 storage for Milvus. 
+Milvus supports Amazon Simple Storage Service (S3) for data persistence of insert log files and index files. This page shows you how to set up S3 storage for Milvus. 
 
-## Deploy S3 on Milvus installed with Docker Compose
+## Set Up S3 with Docker Compose
 
-To deploy S3 on Milvus installed with Docker Compose, you need to change the MinIO/S3 configurations in the **milvus.yaml** under **milvus/configs** directory.
+To set up S3 for Milvus with Docker Compose, you need to change the MinIO/S3 configurations in the **milvus.yaml** under **milvus/configs** directory.
 
 Whereas MinIO is the de facto standard for S3 compatibility, you can configure S3 parameters directly under MinIO section.
 
@@ -21,18 +21,17 @@ minio:
   useSSL: <true/false>
   bucketName: "<your_bucket_name>"
 ```
-
-For more details, see [MinIO/S3 Configurations](configuration_standalone-advanced.md#MinIO-Configurations).
+> For more details, see [MinIO/S3 Configurations](configuration_standalone-advanced.md#MinIOS3-Configurations).
 
 <div class="alert note">
 All parameters take effect only after being configured at the startup of Milvus.
 </div>
 
-## Deploy S3 on Milvus installed with Docker Compose
+## Set up S3 on Kubernetes
 
-For Milvus installed on Kubernetes, you can either configure the parameters at the Milvus startup using Helm Charts or compile the the parameters in the **values.yml** file under **/charts/milvus** directory of [milvus-helm](https://github.com/milvus-io/milvus-helm) repository.
+For Milvus cluster on Kubernetes, you can either configure the parameters in command line while booting up Milvus or in the **values.yml** file under **/charts/milvus** directory of [milvus-helm](https://github.com/milvus-io/milvus-helm) repository before Milvus startup.
 
-### S3 configurations for Helm Charts installation
+Below are S3 configurations for Helm Charts installation:
 
 | Parameter             | Description                          | Note                                 |
 | --------------------- | ------------------------------------ | ------------------------------------ |
@@ -44,24 +43,24 @@ For Milvus installed on Kubernetes, you can either configure the parameters at t
 | externalS3.bucketName | S3 bucket name                       |                                      |
 | minio.enabled         | Enable or disable MinIO              | <code>true</code>/<code>false</code> |
 
-#### Deploy S3 using command line at startup
+### Set up S3 using command line at startup
 
-To deploy S3 for Milvus at the startup, run
+To deploy S3 for Milvus at the startup, run:
 
 ```shell
-helm install <your_release_name> milvus/milvus --set cluster.enabled=true --set externalS3.enabled=true --set externalS3.host='<your_s3_endpoint>' --set externalS3.port=<your_s3_port> --set externalS3.accessKey=<your_s3_access_key_id> --set externalS3.secretKey=<your_s3_secret_key> --set externalS3.bucketName=<your_bucket_name> --set minio.enabled=False
+helm install <your_release_name> milvus/milvus --set cluster.enabled=true --set externalS3.enabled=true --set externalS3.host='<your_s3_endpoint>' --set externalS3.port=<your_s3_port> --set externalS3.accessKey=<your_s3_access_key_id> --set externalS3.secretKey=<your_s3_secret_key> --set externalS3.bucketName=<your_bucket_name> --set minio.enabled=false
 ```
 
-#### Deploy S3 via compiling **values.yaml**
+### Set up S3 via configuring **values.yaml**
 
-Compile the `minio` section in the **values.yaml** file as follow:
+Configure the `minio` section in the **values.yaml** file as follow:
 
 ```yaml
 minio:
   enabled: false
 ```
 
-Compile the `externalS3` section in the **values.yaml** file as follow:
+Configure the `externalS3` section in the **values.yaml** file as follow:
 
 ```yaml
 externalS3:
@@ -70,7 +69,7 @@ externalS3:
   port: "<your_s3_port>"
   accessKey: "<your_s3_access_key_id>"
   secretKey: "<your_s3_secret_key>"
-  useSSL: false
+  useSSL: <true/false>
   bucketName: "<your_bucket_name>"
 ```
 

site/en/menuStructure/en.json

@@ -211,7 +211,7 @@
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       "id": "deploy_s3.md",
-      "title": "Deploy S3 Storage",
+      "title": "Set Up S3 Storage",
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