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-What would life be like without depending on digital devices? How would you communicate? How would you make ends meet? 
+What would life be like without digital devices? How would you communicate? How would you make ends meet? 
 
 Are you capable of it at all? Or are you trapped?
 
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 The day’s agenda
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-The day starts as we stow digital devices and reflect on our objectives:
+The day starts at 10am as we stow digital devices and reflect on our objectives:
 
 - Learn to cut digital devices out of your routine.
 - Reflect on how you use them and how you would exist without.
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 Next, we warm up with analogue activities for expression such as thoughtful letter-writing. These pen and paper techniques can boost productivity and expand your imaginative horizons whilst displacing machine habits.
 
-We then dive into a specially designed LARP: you’ll enter the analogue job market. With help from the career advisor, you consider suitable analogue professions, create a CV poster, put it up on local walls, and await the results. Before the day’s out, you may well have found a new job and got paid, all with no reliance on digital devices.
+In the afternoon, we dive into a specially designed LARP: you’ll enter the analogue job market. With help from the career advisor, you consider suitable analogue professions, create a CV poster, put it up on local walls, and await the results. Before the day’s out, you may well have found a new job and got paid, all with no reliance on digital devices.
 
 This playful escapade questions your ability to get by outside of the fragile constraints of the digital realm.
 
+Just before we end at 6pm, we will review our findings, the letters we've written, and pledge to weave these approaches into our daily life.
+
 
 Come grow your analogue self
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 Take this opportunity to build a more digitally-independent you.
 
-For more info or to join our next retreat on May 31st 2024, [just send a quick email](mailto:[email protected]?subject=I want to Escape the Digital).
+For more info or to join our next retreat on May 31st 2024, [just send us an email](mailto:[email protected]?subject=I want to Escape the Digital).
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+**Who runs the event?**
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+Matthew Linares is a fair-minded futurist who has worked with and around technology through code, talks, workshops and games. I'll help you enjoy this experience to playfully reframe your ways.
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+**What do you need to bring?**
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+You should bring some snacks. We will go to lunch together at a local cafe (menu available in advance). Other than that, you won't need anything.
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+**Does it need to be all day long?**
 
+We have prepared a full day’s worth of activities and suggest that you stick around To experience the whole trip.
 
 
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