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-IPFS Camp 2024 is back this summer and will take place on July 11-13 in Brussels, Belgium alongside EthCC. It is a three-day event filled with workshops, discussion circles, hacking time, and more — all focused on connecting builders and users in the hopes of making the internet more open, efficient, and secure.
+IPFS Camp 2024 is back this summer! It will take place on July 11-13 in Brussels, Belgium alongside EthCC and today we’re announcing a track list so hip you’ll be grooving just reading the headlines. Three days  workshops, discussion circles, hacking time, and more — all focused on connecting builders and users to make the internet more sustainable, democratic, and secure.
 
-To give you a taste of what kinds of topics the event will cover this year, we’re excited to share the 2024 track list below. If any of the tracks sparks your imagination or gives you an idea for something you’d like to present, be sure to submit a proposal for a talk. We’d love to hear from you!
+Excited? Don’t just [register today](https://2024.ipfs.camp/), also go [submit a talk](https://airtable.com/appM094R1Ma5HG757/shrWn6XaRgUkYWPm3)!  We’d love to hear from you! (Yes, *you*!)
 
 <a href="https://2024.ipfs.camp/" class="cta-button">Register Today</a>
 
-[Submit a talk](https://airtable.com/appM094R1Ma5HG757/shrWn6XaRgUkYWPm3)
 
 ## 2024 Track List
 
 ### Opening Keynotes
-A warm and wonderful kickoff to IPFS Camp with keynote speakers, fireside chats, and a sampling of community talks and perspectives on the present and future of IPFS.
+A warm and wonderful kickoff to IPFS Camp with keynote speakers, fireside chats, and a smörgåsbord of community talks and perspectives on the present and future of IPFS.
 
 ### Decentralized Apps and Publishing
-Explore the latest tools, frameworks, and best practices for building and deploying dApps that are resilient and put users in control of their data.
+Explore the latest tools, frameworks, and best practices for building and deploying dApps that are resilient, fully decentralized, hard to phish, and respect people’s privacy.
 
 ### Public Records and Human Rights
-Discover how IPFS is being used to protect public records and support human rights initiatives worldwide.
+Discover how IPFS is being used to protect public records, to authenticate pictures online, and support human rights initiatives worldwide.
 
 ### AI in 2024: Ethics, Ownership, and Data
-In this track, we'll explore urgent topics of attribution, ethics, and payment in the age of AI-generated art, music, and text. Then, we’ll dive into how content-addressed data can forge new opportunities for creators and developers.
+In this track, we'll explore urgent topics of attribution, ethics, and payment in the age of AI-generated art, music, and text. Then, we’ll dive into how content-addressed data forges new opportunities for creators and developers.
 
 ### Climate Resilience and IPFS
 In the face of the growing climate crisis, reliable and transparent environmental data is more crucial than ever. This track explores real-world applications of IPFS in environmental monitoring, climate modeling, and disaster response.
 
 ### Syncing Bytes at Scale
-Dive into the latest techniques and tools for efficiently syncing bytes at scale with IPFS. Learn how to optimize data transfer, ensure data integrity, and reduce bandwidth costs. Whether you're working with scientific, media, or enterprise data, this track has something for anyone working with large-scale data.
+Dive into the latest techniques and tools for efficiently syncing bytes at scale with IPFS. Learn how to optimize data transfer, ensure data integrity, and reduce bandwidth costs. Whether you're working with scientific, media, or enterprise data — or any kind of large-scale data whatsoever to be honest, it’s all about the bytes — this track has something for you.
 
 ### Libp2p Day
 Join us for a full day dedicated to libp2p, the modular networking stack that powers IPFS, Ethereum, and other decentralized protocols. Learn about the latest developments in libp2p, including new transports, improved NAT traversal, and enhanced security features. Hear from the core developers and researchers behind libp2p, and discover how you can use this powerful library to build your own networks and applications.
 
 ### IPLD, Databases, and the People Who Love Them
-Meet the passionate developers and researchers pushing the boundaries of what's possible with IPLD. Learn how experts are IPLD to build more efficient, interoperable databases and data structures, and join the efforts to push IPLD forward.
+Meet the passionate developers and researchers pushing the boundaries of what's possible with IPLD. Learn how experts use IPLD to build more efficient, interoperable databases and data structures, and join the efforts to push IPLD forward.
 
 ### Startup Showcase
 Lightning talks from projects and startups using IPFS to solve real-world problems, plus roundtables on how to solve shared challenges.