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docs/sources/helm-charts/mimir-distributed/release-notes/v5.5.md

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 ## Important changes
 
-- The ingester is configured with `GOMAXPROCS` to help with the overhead from Go scheduler, observed on hosts with lots of CPU cores.
-- The GEM query-frontend logs the query author's access policy name and token name in the query statistics logs. This provides a better visibility of who (which token) is running a potentially expensive query.
+- The ingester is configured with `GOMAXPROCS` to help with overhead from the Go scheduler, observed on hosts with a large number of CPU cores.
+- The GEM query-frontend logs the query author's access policy name and token name in the query statistics logs. This provides more visibility as which token is running a potentially expensive query.
 - Dashboards are updated to allow switching between classic and native histograms in the queries that support it.
 
 ## Features and enhancements
 
 Notable enhancements are as follows:
 
-- The dashboard config maps now support setting a namespace.
+- The dashboard configuration maps support setting a namespace.
 - The `topologySpreadConstraints` configuration of all components is updated to better match what is allowed in Kubernetes.
-- The metamonitoring now supports AWS Signature Version 4 (sigv4) authentication for remote write.
-- The metamonitoring is updated allowing its Grafana Agent pods setting image pull secrets, node selectors, tolerations, topology spread constraints, and resource requests and limits.
+- Metamonitoring supports AWS Signature Version 4 (sigv4) authentication for remote write.
+- Metamonitoring is updated to allow its Grafana Agent pods to set image pull secrets, node selectors, tolerances, topology spread constraints, and resource requests and limits.
 - The continous-test is updated to allow setting separate read and write URLs.
 - The continous-test can be enabled in GEM.