Small improvements to wording and internal linking #1266
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johnwaterworth
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| And we plan the pace of our research to avoid building up analysis and synthesis debt. | ||
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| Our rule of thumb is “one part research to two parts communication”. For a day spent doing interviews, for example, we expect to spend the next two days on analysis and synthesis, and sharing your findings. | ||
| Our rule of thumb is “one part research to two parts communication”. For a day spent doing interviews, for example, we expect to spend the two more days on analysis and synthesis, and sharing findings. |
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There is an extra 'the' and the 'more' is not needed, in my opinion. This means this sentence could look like this:
"Our rule of thumb is “one part research to two parts communication”. For example, for one day spent doing an interviews, we expect to spend two days on analysis and synthesis, and sharing findings"
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I'd already removed the stray 'the'. And I've removed the unnecessary 'more'.
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in line 26 I still see the word 'more'
"Our rule of thumb is “one part research to two parts communication”. For a day spent doing interviews, for example, we expect to spend two more days on analysis and synthesis, and sharing findings."
In line 30, why are you keeping the word 'findings' at the start of the sentence? "findings and next steps we can justify - as we are often challenged to explain why we have come to those conclusions". Findings are not conclusions and this point seems to be about 'next steps' not findings. Next steps are an outcome of analysis of findings.
Remove unnecessary 'more'
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Got rid of the 'more' again. That change must have got lost in the Github changes yesterday. |
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This point is about being able to justify both findings and next steps. As we get challenged on both. |
ZuleimaMR
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Improve some wording. Add internal links to new section.