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 # Step by step instruction to launch a Jupyter Notebook in Datahub
 
-## Option 1 - 
+## Option 1 - nbgitpuller way
 
-- Click this [link](https://datahub.berkeley.edu/hub/user-redirect/git-pull?repo=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fds-modules%2FDatahub-Workshop&branch=main&urlpath=tree%2FDatahub-Workshop%2Firis.ipynb) to launch a Jupyter notebook. This will clone a repository containing a Jupyter notebook to your Berkeley Jupyterhub's home directory.
+- Click this [link](https://datahub.berkeley.edu/hub/user-redirect/git-pull?repo=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fds-modules%2FDatahub-Workshop&branch=main&urlpath=tree%2FDatahub-Workshop%2Firis.ipynb) to launch a Jupyter notebook. This will clone a repository containing a Jupyter notebook to the home directory of your Berkeley Jupyterhub account.
 - Execute all the cells in the "iris.ipynb" notebook which is located inside "datahub_workshop_feb24" directory
 - Download the notebook by selecting "File -> Download" option
-- Login to your Github account. Incase you don't have an account, Try creating a new Github account (or collaborate with someone who has a Github account)
-- Create a new Github repository (If you are new to Github, check this [documentation](https://docs.github.com/en/repositories/creating-and-managing-repositories/quickstart-for-repositories) for detailed steps) 
-- Upload the notebook to Github repository (Refer to this [documentation](https://ds-modules.github.io/curriculum-guide/workflow/pushing-to-github.html?highlight=upload#using-the-web-interface) if required)
+- Login to your Github account. Incase you don't have an account, try creating a new Github account for the sake of this activity (or collaborate with someone who has a Github account)
+- Create a new Github repository (If you are new to Github, check this [documentation](https://docs.github.com/en/repositories/creating-and-managing-repositories/quickstart-for-repositories) for detailed steps to create a repository) 
+- Upload the notebook to Github repository (Refer to this [documentation](https://ds-modules.github.io/curriculum-guide/workflow/pushing-to-github.html?highlight=upload#using-the-web-interface) if needed)
 - Install the nbgitpuller browser extension using this [link](https://chromewebstore.google.com/detail/datahub-link-generator/lnaihiajhgbdabdnghflmjnamjkojpke?hl=en&authuser=1). Please follow the steps in the [documentation](https://ds-modules.github.io/curriculum-guide/workflow/distributing-notebooks.html?highlight=nbgitpuller#nbgitpuller-plugin) to make the extension visible in your browser
-- Generate a new nbgitpuller link by entering the following details and clicking the button "Copy nbgitpuller link"
+- Generate a new nbgitpuller link by entering the following details in the input fields and clicking the button "Copy nbgitpuller link"
 "JupyterHub URL": "https://datahub.berkeley.edu/", 
 "Open In": "Classic Notebook"
 - Share the nbgitpuller link with another collaborator who is attending the workshop
 
 
-## Option 2
+## Option 2 - PDF wag
 
 - Click this [link](https://drive.google.com/drive/u/1/folders/12qOYTF3JELjBuofxsC4ktLBZFt2GD1TG) to download a PDF containing python code
 - Login to https://datahub.berkeley.edu/
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 - Save the notebook
 - Download the notebook by selecting "File -> Download" option
 - Login to your Github account or Create a new Github account
-- Create a new Github repository (If you are new to Github, check this [documentation](https://docs.github.com/en/repositories/creating-and-managing-repositories/quickstart-for-repositories) for detailed steps) - Upload the notebook to Github repository
+- Create a new Github repository (If you are new to Github, check this [documentation](https://docs.github.com/en/repositories/creating-and-managing-repositories/quickstart-for-repositories) for detailed steps). Upload the downloaded notebook to this Github repository.
 - Install the nbgitpuller browser extension using this [link](https://chromewebstore.google.com/detail/datahub-link-generator/lnaihiajhgbdabdnghflmjnamjkojpke?hl=en&authuser=1). Please follow the steps in the [documentation](https://ds-modules.github.io/curriculum-guide/workflow/distributing-notebooks.html?highlight=nbgitpuller#nbgitpuller-plugin) to make the extension visible in your browser
-- Generate a new nbgitpuller link by entering the following details and clicking the button "Copy nbgitpuller link"
+- Generate a new nbgitpuller link by entering the following details in the input fields and clicking the button "Copy nbgitpuller link"
 "JupyterHub URL": "https://datahub.berkeley.edu/", 
 "Open In": "Classic Notebook"
 - Share the nbgitpuller link with another collaborator who is attending the workshop