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dev/release/README.md

@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ git push apache branch-0.1
 
 Create and merge a PR against the release branch to update the Maven version from `0.1.0-SNAPSHOT` to `0.1.0`
 
-### Generating the Change Log
+### Generate the Change Log
 
 Generate a change log to cover changes between the previous release and the release branch HEAD by running 
 the provided `generate-changelog.py` script.
@@ -90,24 +90,15 @@ Create a PR against the main branch to update the Rust crate version to `0.2.0`
 
 This part of the process can mostly only be performed by a PMC member.
 
-- Run the create-tarball script on the release branch to create the source tarball and upload it to the dev subversion repository
+- Run the create-tarball script on the release candidate tag (`0.1.0-rc1`) to create the source tarball and upload it to the dev subversion repository
 - Start an email voting thread
 - Once the vote passes, run the release-tarball script to move the tarball to the release subversion repository
 - Register the release with the [Apache Reporter Service](https://reporter.apache.org/addrelease.html?datafusion) using
   a version such as `COMET-0.1.0`
 - Delete old release candidates and releases from the subversion repositories
-- Push a release tag (e.g. 0.1.0) to the Apache repository
+- Push a release tag (`0.1.0`) to the Apache repository
 - Reply to the vote thread to close the vote and announce the release
 
-## Publishing JAR Files to Maven
-
-The process for publishing JAR files to Maven is not defined yet.
-
-## Publishing to crates.io
-
-We may choose to publish the `datafusion-comet` to crates.io so that other Rust projects can leverage the
-Spark-compatible operators and expressions outside of Spark.
-
 ## Verifying Release Candidates
 
 The vote email will link to this section of this document, so this is where we will need to provide instructions for
@@ -129,6 +120,17 @@ Another way of verifying the release is to follow the
 [Comet Benchmarking Guide](https://datafusion.apache.org/comet/contributor-guide/benchmarking.html) and compare
 performance with the previous release.
 
+## Publishing Binary Releases
+
+### Publishing JAR Files to Maven
+
+The process for publishing JAR files to Maven is not defined yet.
+
+### Publishing to crates.io
+
+We may choose to publish the `datafusion-comet` to crates.io so that other Rust projects can leverage the
+Spark-compatible operators and expressions outside of Spark.
+
 ## Post Release Activities
 
 Writing a blog post about the release is a great way to generate more interest in the project. We typically create a