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 <p>You’re writing this for someone. Often, many audiences with different entryways.</p>
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+<p>Make it engaging, specific. Doesn’t have to be dry or distant.</p>
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 You're writing this for someone. Often, many audiences with different entryways. 
 
-Make it engaging - doesn't have to be dry or distant. 
+Make it engaging, specific. Doesn't have to be dry or distant. 
 
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