Merge pull request #818 from marionbarker/working-docs

simplify language for digital compliance steps

docs/gh-actions/gh-first-time.md

@@ -1011,28 +1011,28 @@ The full list of Identifiers should be displayed again.
 
 ## Digital Service Act Compliance
 
-In order to create an App you need to indicate whether you are a trader or a non-trader. Most people who use this guide to build a DIY app are non-traders. (If you use the same account to submit apps for sale - you are in a different category.) This is a new requirement and the graphic below might not represent what Apple shows you but should assist in guiding you through the steps.
+In order to create an app you need to indicate whether you are a trader or a non-trader. You are a non-trader unless you use the same Developer ID to submit apps for sale.
+
+Even if the graphic below does not match what you see exactly, it should assist in guiding you through the steps.
 
 Open this link: [`App Store Connect / Apps`](https://appstoreconnect.apple.com/apps){: target="_blank" }; log in if needed.
 
 If you do not see the banner, shown in the top of the graphic below, asking you to Complete Compliance Requirements, you can skip ahead to [Create Loop App in App Store Connect](#create-loop-app-in-app-store-connect).
 
-If you do see the banner, follow the numbered steps in the composite graphic below:
+If you do see the banner, follow the numbered steps in the graphic below:
 
-1. You will click on the link that says "Complete Compliance Requirements" to open a new screen
+1. Click on the link that says "Complete Compliance Requirements" to open a new screen shown in the middle of the graphic below
 
-2. The new screen is shown in the middle of the graphic below
-    * Tap on the "Complete Compliance Requirements for Your Name" link
+2. Tap on the "Complete Compliance Requirements for Your Name" link to bring up a pop-up shown in the bottom of the graphic below
 
-3. A popup shows up in the middle your browser, as shown in the bottom of the graphic below
-    * Select the "This is a non-trader provider account" radio button
+3. Select the "This is a non-trader provider account" radio button
 
 4. Click Save
 
 ![app store connect digital service act compliance steps](img/not-a-trader.svg){width="800"}
 {align="center"}
 
-You do not need to add a bank account or fill out tax forms. You will not be selling this app. You're just using the App Store as a convenient way to get your own app on your own phone.
+You do not need to add a bank account or fill out tax forms if you are only using the App Store to get your own app into TestFlight. You only need to have a paid account with a valid license agreement and have completed this compliance form. Ignore other requests from Apple.
 
 ## :material-dots-triangle: Substep 8.2 for Step 8