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From: Calcody-Lee Mcneill <90211507+PinkDiamond1@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Sun, 13 Mar 2022 20:44:39 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Revert "Editorial suggestions"

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-# Twitch Unity Deep Link Sample
+# Twitch Unity Deeplink Sample
 
-## What does this do?
+## What does this do
 
-This example shows you how to check if Twitch is installed on both Android and iOS in Unity.
-Additionally, this showcases how to launch a broadcast for a particular game ID using the Twitch mobile app's deep link functionality.
+This example shows you how to check if twitch is installed on both Android and IOS in Unity.
+Additionaly, this showcases how to launch a broadcast for a particular game id using the Twitch mobile app's deeplink functionality
 
-## How to use it
+## How to use
 
-Depending on which mobile platform and OS version you are targeting, you may need to make additional changes.
-See additional details below for a given platform.
+Depending on which mobile platform and OS version you are targeting you may need to make additional changes.
+See below for additional details for a given platform.
 
 ### UI interface
 
-The "Open Twitch" button will launch the Twitch mobile app. Buttons will disable if Twitch is not installed.
+The open twitch button will simply launch the twitch app. (Buttons will disable if Twitch is not installed)
 
-The input field (i.e. text box) is used to enter your game ID. A game ID can be retrieved via the [Get Games](https://dev.twitch.tv/docs/api/reference#get-games) API endpoint.
-Once the game ID has been entered, tap the "Broadcast" button to start Twitch streaming via the deep link functionality.
+The input text box is used to enter your game id. Getting the game id can be done via this api: https://dev.twitch.tv/docs/api/reference#get-games
+Once the game id has been entered push the "Broadcast" button to start twitch streaming via the deeplink functionality.
 
 ### Android
 
-On Unity 2021 and above, no changes will be needed.
+On Unity 2021 and above no changes will be needed.
 
-When using Unity 2020, the following manifest change is required:
+When using Unity 2020 it will require the following manifest change:
 
-    <meta-data android:name="unityplayer.UnityActivity" android:value="true" />
+`<meta-data android:name="unityplayer.UnityActivity" android:value="true" />`
 
-When using Unity 2019 or earlier, the following manifest changes are required. Note this was not tested but should work:
+When using Unity 2019 or earlier the following manifest changes will be required. 
+(Note this was not tested but should work):
 
     <activity android:name="com.unity3d.player.UnityPlayerNativeActivity"
               android:label="@string/app_name">
@@ -44,25 +45,22 @@ When using Unity 2019 or earlier, the following manifest changes are required. N
 
 ### IOS
 
-You must add "twitch" in `LSApplicationQueriesSchemes` to your app's Info.plist file.
+You must add twitch in LSApplicationQueriesSchemes to your app's Info.plist
 
 There are two ways to do so:
+1. Manually via editing the plist, this will require you to export to xcode
 
-#### 1. Manually editing the plist
-
-This will require you to export to Xcode. plist example:
+plist example:
 
     <key>LSApplicationQueriesSchemes</key>
         <array>
             <string>twitch</string>
         </array>
 
-More documentation can be found [here](https://developer.apple.com/documentation/uikit/uiapplication/1622952-canopenurl?language=objc).
-
-#### 2. Programmatically editing the plist
+More documentation can be found here: https://developer.apple.com/documentation/uikit/uiapplication/1622952-canopenurl?language=objc
 
-An example can be found [here](https://github.com/Nrjwolf/unity-ios-can-open-url#example).
+2. Alternatively you can do this programatically. Find an example here: https://github.com/Nrjwolf/unity-ios-can-open-url#example
 
-## Acknowledgments and appendix
+## Acknowledgments and Appendix
 
-Specials thanks to @Nrjwolf for creating [UNITY-IOS-CAN-OPEN](https://github.com/Nrjwolf/unity-ios-can-open-url).
+Specials thanks to Nrjwolf for creating UNITY-IOS-CAN-OPEN: https://github.com/Nrjwolf/unity-ios-can-open-url