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   created: 2024-12-15
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 # Systems Thinking - an Introduction
 
-What is Systems Thinking and why is it also important for Software Development?
-
-## The water cycle
-
-Remember the last time you saw flooding in TV or real live? Why is there suddenly so much water that it takes away cars, homes and apparently lives?
-
-Often it cannot be tracked back to a single event. It is the **interaction of elements**.  
+What is Systems Thinking and why is it also important for Software Development? Let's look at the water cycle. Remember the last time you saw a flood?  
+<!-- more -->Why is there suddenly so much water that can take away cars, homes, even lives? Often it cannot be tracked back to a single event. It is the **interaction of elements**.  
 
 - Rivers get less space to transport water way  
-- City is full of concrete that does not absorb water
-- Sun heats up concrete
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-- Concrete releases heat into the air at night
+- a City is full of concrete that does not absorb water
+- the Sun heats up concrete
+- Concrete releases heat into the air
 - Hot air rises and is condensing, leading to more moisture in the Air
 - Once it starts raining the water cannot be absorbed nor transported away fast enough leading to flooding  
 
-This is a **nonlinear system**. Systems Thinking is Nonlinear.
+This is a **nonlinear system**. Systems Thinking is nonlinear.
 
 ## What is a linear System?
 
-A server costs you say 10 EUR / day. If you add another that's 20 EUR / day. There is a **disconnection between the elements**.
+A server costs you say 10 EUR / day. If you add another, that's 20 EUR / day. There is a **disconnection between the elements**.
 
 ## Is Software Development linear or nonlinear?
 
-Let's learn Python, it has 35 keywords. Once you know each of them you know Python right? Wrong.  
+Let's learn Python, it has 35 keywords. Once you know each keyword you know Python right? Wrong.  
 
 You can however learn Python with a linear approach.  
 
@@ -44,7 +39,7 @@ To further learn and better benefit from the language soon you need to structure
 When building a web shop you don't want to write every functionality on your own.  
 
 You use already developed parts and need to learn how to connect them.  
-What are their **Relationships**.  
+What are their **Relationships**?  
 How do they interact?  
 You create a new **Whole**.  
 A mistake sneaks into the system. You start analyzing.  
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 ## Exercice for you
 
 You plant 3 chili seeds.  
-How much plants will you get?  
-Is this a linera or a non linear system?
+How many plants will you get?  
+Is this a linear or a nonlinear system?