Thoughts on Intro page

[jwrober]

Some general thoughts on the Intro page:

• Internet is capitalized
• Using an emoji is horrible grammar [e.g. ;)]
• We should bump 30 mins to 30-45 mins a day. We should be honest that at certain points of the game 30 mins is not going to cut it if you are serious
• Change "usually played on Freeciv servers" to "usually played on varying Civilization servers". The corp games support online multiplayer too.
• Change "Fourthly, and for me this is" to "Fourthly, and for us this is". Let's use the plural form of the possessive.
• Change "Longturn.net games are starting a few times" to "Longturn.net games start a few times"
• Change "amount of idler as much" to "amount of idlers as much"
• The Types of Games section needs a complete rewrite. We have LTT, LTX games as rulesets. Could call out AVI and SIM as alternate rulesets. Then talk about how players assemble: Teamless/Free For All, Teams, League, etc.

[lmoureaux]

https://github.com/longturn/www/blob/master/templates/hello.html