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-title: Vision - Thinking Machines
-description: We want to continue a legacy of craftsmen making tools that propel humanity forward.
+title: Vision - Cybernetic Future of Humanity
+description: We're architecting the cybernetic future of humanity. We aim to create AI that propels our species forward and expands the horizons of human potential.
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   [
-    Jan AI,
+    Homebrew,
     Thinking Machines,
     Jan,
     ChatGPT alternative,
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 ![Solarpunk Civilization](./_assets/solarpunk.jpeg)
 
-- Harmonious symbiosis of humans, nature, and machines
-- Humanity has over millennia adopted tools. Fire, electricity, computers, and AI.
-- AI is no different. It is a tool that can propel humanity forward.
-- We reject the 
-- Go beyond the apocalypse narratives of Dune and Terminator, and you will find a kernel of progress
+At Homebrew, we're architecting the cybernetic future of humanity. We aim to create AI that propels our species forward and expands the horizons of human potential.
 
-We want to continue a legacy of craftsmen making tools that propel humanity forward.
+History shows that new technologies bring both excitement and fear:
+
+- Electricity sparked fear before it powered our world
+- Space travel was impossible until we touched the stars
+- AI stands as our next leap forward and offers both promise and challenges
+
+In this leap, we are the craftsmen forging the tools that will shape our species' destiny. We're creating a cybernetic future where AI and humanity evolve together, each enhancing the other's capabilities.
 
 ## Collaborating with Thinking Machines
 
-Our vision is to develop thinking machines that work alongside humans.
+![Luke Skywalker & R2-D2](./_assets/Luke_Skywalker_R2-D2.jpg)
 
-We envision a future where AI is safely used as a tool in our daily lives, like fire and electricity. These robots enhance human potential and do not replace our key decision-making. You own your own AI.
+Imagine a world where anyone can tinker with AI as easily as Luke Skywalker could with R2-D2, without the need for support tickets to some far-off server. This is the future we're building - where AI is not a black box, but an instrument of progress designed to be understood, modified, and improved by those who use it.
 
-![jan ai shapes the future](./_assets/vision-1.webp)
+We build AI to enhance human capabilities, not replace them. Our vision is to create AIs that work alongside humans, enabling us to do more, live better lives, and help build a stronger society. Our aim is to build AI that empowers the next generation to achieve feats we couldn’t even imagine today.
 
 ![Solarpunk Civilization](./_assets/solar-punk.webp)
 > We like that Luke can just open up R2-D2 and tinker around. He was not submitting support tickets to a centralized server somewhere in the galaxy.
@@ -49,8 +51,6 @@ We envision a future where AI is safely used as a tool in our daily lives, like
 
 Our vision is rooted in an optimistic view of AI's role in humanity's future.
 
-Like the [Solarpunk movement](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Solarpunk), we envision a world where technology and nature coexist harmoniously, supporting a sustainable and flourishing ecosystem.
-
-We focus on AI's positive impacts on our world. From environmental conservation to the democratization of energy, AI has the potential to address some of the most pressing challenges facing our planet.
+Like the [Solarpunk movement](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Solarpunk), we envision a world where technology and nature coexist harmoniously. 
 
-https://www.yesmagazine.org/environment/2021/01/28/climate-change-sustainable-solarpunk
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+At Homebrew, our commitment is to develop AI that is energy-efficient and earth-friendly. Because the future we're building is about harmony that respects our planet and all its inhabitants.