Feedback Ap Reinders: Do not disturb the reader by addressing him too often

[mhdirkse]

Searching for the word "you" produces very many hits. The reader is very often addressed directly. The text will calm down if references to "you" are reduced. Not "you will study", but for example "next steps are". There are already numbered steps, so introductory paragraphs may be omitted sometimes.

Ap also suggested not to write "please" so much.