Update back-to-school-campus-tour-2024

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 **Update:**
 
-We just wrapped up our #CodedexCampusTour! 🥹 Wow wow wow. 
+We just wrapped up our #CodedexCampusTour! 🥹 Wow, wow, WOW.
 
 Thanks to ALL of you that this special night came to life. 💖
 
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 - 📍 Stop 4 - DivHacks @ **Columbia**: [carousel](https://www.instagram.com/p/DA4BPy4S8Gd/?img_index=1), [street interview 1](https://www.instagram.com/p/DBKD5fuS_zx), [street interview 2](https://www.instagram.com/p/DBPNLX9Sdwg)
 - 📍 Stop 5 - Back 2 School Bash @ **Wix**: [vlog](https://www.instagram.com/p/DBMxnzXStFy), [carousel](https://www.instagram.com/p/DBHndh5y_uE/?img_index=1), [subway ad](https://www.instagram.com/p/DA6x3GuPW_c)
 
-Here's Ellie's vlog:
+Here's Ellie's vlog for the finale event:
 
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-From the bottom of our pixelated hearts, we want to thank each and every one of you who attended our biggest IRL event yet and made this such a special night. (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ We are filled with so much love & gratitude... Big thank you to our panelists for sharing their stories and being such good vibes. (☆ω☆) Huge thank you to Wix Studio, GitHub Education, and jam.dev for supporting us on our #CodedexCampusTour. And lastly, a special thank you to our amazing community for showing up with the best energy, enthusiasm, and willingness to learn. YOU are the reason we do this and there’s so much more to come. (°◡°♡)
+From the bottom of our pixelated hearts, we want to thank each and every one of you who attended our IRL events and made this such a special tour. (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ We are filled with so much love & gratitude. (☆ω☆) Huge thank you to [Wix Studio](https://www.wix.com/studio), [GitHub Education](https://github.com/education), and [Jam.dev](https://jam.dev) for supporting us on our #CodedexCampusTour. And lastly, a special thank you to our amazing community for showing up with the best energy, enthusiasm, and willingness to learn. YOU are the reason we do this and there’s so much more to come. (°◡°♡)
 
 With love,
 Team Codédex