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 === Abstract ===
 
-This document proposes a new SegWit output type, with spending rules based initially-- but not solely-- upon FALCON signatures. (For more on why, see the Rationale and Security sections.) A constraint is that no hard fork or increase in block size is necessary. This document is inspired by [https://github.com/bitcoin/bips/blob/master/bip-0341.mediawiki BIP-341], which introduced the design of the P2TR (Taproot) address type using Schnorr signatures.
+This document proposes the introduction of a new output type based on FALCON signatures. This approach for adding a post-quantum secure output type does not require a hard fork or block size increase.
 
 
 === Copyright ===
@@ -26,9 +26,9 @@ This document is licensed under the 3-clause BSD license.
 
 This proposal aims to improve the quantum resistance of bitcoin's signature security should the Discrete Logarithm Problem (DLP) which secures Elliptic Curve Cryptography (ECC) no longer prove to be computationally hard, likely through quantum advantage by Cryptographically-Relevant Quantum Computers (CRQCs). [https://arxiv.org/pdf/quant-ph/0301141 A variant of Shor's algorithm] is believed to be capable of deriving the private key from a public key exponentially faster than classical means. The application of this variant of Shor's algorithm is herein referred to as quantum key decryption. Note that doubling the public key length, such as with a hypothetical secp512k1 curve, would only make deriving the private key twice as hard. The computational complexity of this is investigated further in the paper, [https://pubs.aip.org/avs/aqs/article/4/1/013801/2835275/The-impact-of-hardware-specifications-on-reaching ''The impact of hardware specifications on reaching quantum advantage in the fault tolerant regime''].
 
-The primary threat to Bitcoin by CRQCs is [https://en.bitcoin.it/wiki/Quantum_computing_and_Bitcoin#QC_attacks generally considered to be to its breaking of ECC used in signatures and Taproot commitments], hence the focus on a new address format. This is because Shor's algorithm enables a CRQC to break the cryptographic assumptions of ECC in roughly 10^8 quantum operations. While a CRQC could use [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grover's_algorithm Grover's algorithm] to gain a quadratic speed up on brute force attacks on the hash functions used in Bitcoin, a significantly more powerful CRQC is needed for these attacks to meaningfully impact Bitcoin. For instance, a preimage attack on HASH160<ref>used by P2PKH, P2SH, and P2WPKH addresses, though not P2WSH because it uses 256-bit hashes</ref> using Grover's algorithm would require at least 10^24 quantum operations. As for Grover's application to mining, see [https://quantumcomputing.stackexchange.com/a/12847 Sam Jaques post on this].
+The primary threat to Bitcoin by CRQCs is [https://en.bitcoin.it/wiki/Quantum_computing_and_Bitcoin#QC_attacks generally considered to be to its breaking of ECC used in signatures and Taproot commitments], hence the focus on a new address format. This is because Shor's algorithm enables a CRQC to break the cryptographic assumptions of ECC in roughly 10^8 quantum operations. While a CRQC could use [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grover's_algorithm Grover's algorithm] to gain a quadratic speed up on brute force attacks on the hash functions used in Bitcoin, a significantly more powerful CRQC is needed for these attacks to meaningfully impact Bitcoin. For instance, a preimage attack on HASH160<ref>used by P2PKH, P2SH, and P2WPKH addresses, though not P2WSH because it uses 256-bit hashes</ref> using Grover's algorithm would require at least 10^24 quantum operations. As for Grover's application to mining, see [https://quantumcomputing.stackexchange.com/a/12847 Sam Jaques’ post on this].
 
-The vulnerability of existing bitcoin addresses is investigated in [https://web.archive.org/web/20240715101040/https://www2.deloitte.com/nl/nl/pages/innovatie/artikelen/quantum-computers-and-the-bitcoin-blockchain.html this Deloitte report]. The report estimates that in 2020 approximately 25% of the bitcoin supply is held within addresses vulnerable to quantum attack. As of the time of writing, that number is now closer to 20%. Additionally, cryptographer Peter Wuille estimates even more might be vulnerable, for the reasons provided [https://x.com/pwuille/status/1108085284862713856 here].
+The vulnerability of existing bitcoin addresses is investigated in [https://web.archive.org/web/20240715101040/https://www2.deloitte.com/nl/nl/pages/innovatie/artikelen/quantum-computers-and-the-bitcoin-blockchain.html this Deloitte report]. The report estimates that in 2020 approximately 25% of the bitcoin supply is held within addresses vulnerable to quantum attack. As of the time of writing, that number is now closer to 20%. Additionally, cryptographer Pieter Wuille [https://x.com/pwuille/status/1108085284862713856 reasons] even more might be vulnerable.
 
 Ordinarily, when a transaction is signed, the public key can be recovered from the signature. This makes a transaction submitted to the mempool vulnerable to quantum attack until it's mined. One way to mitigate this is to submit the transaction directly to a mining pool, which bypasses the mempool. This process is known as an out-of-band transaction. The mining pool must be trusted not to reveal the transaction public key to attackers.
 
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Not having public keys exposed on-chain is an important step for quantum securit
 
 It is proposed to implement a Pay to Quantum Resistant Hash (P2QRH) address type that relies on a Post-Quantum Cryptographic (PQC) signature algorithm. This new address type protects transactions submitted to the mempool and helps preserve the free market by reducing the need for private, out-of-band mempool transactions.
 
-The following table is non-exhaustive but intended to inform the average bitcoin user whether their bitcoin is vulnerable to quantum attack.
+The following table is non-exhaustive but intended to inform the average bitcoin user whether their bitcoin is vulnerable to a long-range quantum attack.
 
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 |+ Vulnerable address types